Thursday, October 14, 2004

Diagram, please?

"LOGLINE: Obsessed with the murder of her lover EDDIE'S wife, SUSAN goes to extreme measures to set up a seemingly innocent man so EDDIEcan take revenge; but the man survives and comes back for his own revenge.

PREMISE: EDDIE is so deeply traumatized by the brutal murder of his wife that his on-again off-again girlfriend, SUSAN, decides to take matters into her own hands. When a chance encounter lands her in a taxi with a rough driver named ROGER, she sets him up as the killer so EDDIE will find him and take revenge. But Roger survives the attempted murder and comes back to reclaim SUSAN who has to kill Roger herself, especially when she finds out that he truly is the killer."


At 4:20 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

That's Actually kinda a good idea, once you wrap your brain around it.

At 10:39 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Um, no. No it's not. If nothing else, there's a premise problem: if his wife was just murdered, what's he doing with an on-again off-again girlfriend? If he has this girlfriend because he's dissatisfied with his marriage, why's he so "deeply traumatized" his wife is dead (brutally murdered or not)?

At 4:43 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wait a minute. What? What?! What?!?!? Why is SUSAN obessessed with EDDIE'S wife's murder?

Am I confused because all their names are in caps? Why does ROGER'S name suddenly switch to only an initial cap, when SUSAN and EDDIE always get all caps?


At 1:26 PM, Blogger Bus Rider said...

I would think Eddie would be the first suspect in his wife's murder, since if he's having an affair wouldn't he want to off his wife so he can be with his mistress? A possible redeeming climactic twist for this story could be if Eddie is actually also Roger, because Eddie has a split personality disorder, and thus must commit suicide to avenge his wife's death.

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