Check out Terry Rossio's (SHREK, POTC) site devoted to queries
His site takes on more of an educational tone, which is good. Mine is about making fun of people, which is bad (but ultimately more fun).
Anyways, if you're one who wants to "learn" things about "writing" check out Terry's excellent "TOP 20 MOST COMMON MISTAKES IN WRITING A QUERY LETTER".
I believe every one of his rules are broken on this site.
Hey Terry, need a manager? I'll package you with Red Eye Jack. Gold, Jerry, Gold!