So here's the format: The query letters (or parts of them) are below in quotes. My commentary - if any - follows. Some, like this one, need no commentary. How could I possibly be funnier than this:
"I’d like to introduce my second script – an Adventure/Romance/Magical Story about two college students helped by 5 scientist-ghosts to develop 2 revolutionary new inventions and get them marketed to the world despite an unscrupulous multinational corporate president who wants to steal them. "
Complaints or praise? Email me: firstname.lastname@example.org